I am a Year 5 learner in rooms 9 and 10 at Pt England School in Auckland, NZ. My teachers are Mrs Buchanan and Miss West.
Talofa Eden,I love the detail on your graphics. Next time please slow down when recording your voice over. Keep striving to succeed.Love Mum
I really enjoy how your voiceover tells us a story of a competition. What else did you learn about fencing?Your animation is smooth and easy to watch - but like mum suggested, slow down a little when you share your voice over.You've had such a great term sharing all your learning so creatively. Well done Eden.